Improvement!
I can see really accurate lines here now! I'll give you a tip. Try to make your lines reall-really tiny. That will help your drawing look better; also, try to not use smooth shading. Just try it. :D I like this picture very much! It's an eye-candy! And I absolutely love the bright background here. You're getting better hun'. :)
- Artyluck (I just forgot my password for account, rofl; and too lazy to search it in my PC, haha)